Going Under Paperback – October 17, 2015

This book had potential but the typos and the way it jumped all over the place made it hard to keep up. For example, one minute they are cooking out for 4th of July and uncle gets to fighting..turn the page (literally) someone named Taj comes baring gifts for the main character at graduation?? This made me lose real interest immediately. We would like for a story to build up but not many stories at once. Try again because this was not it. Good story line, poorly put together.

This is a pretty good book. Well, some what a page Turner. The only reason why I gave it three stars is the editing were out of place. What I mean is the editing of this book should have been much better. Some people may over look this, but not I. It takes away from the meaning of the storyline and the characters especially if their is a mix up with that character for that particular part of the story. I will see how part 2 turn out.

Mahogany is walking right into the arms of trouble. It’s crazy, because it seems she has someone that is in her life that is good for her and willing to give her a good life. She is just not accepting of it I do feel though that she will learn and see in time that is where she needs to be. The book had a lot of grammatical errors, also in parts of the storyline the wrong characters would be used for that part. Good thing I was paying attention and was aware of who should have been mentioned. There is a part 2 I would like to know what becomes of Mahogany and her family.

It's only a matter of time when Mahogany stays strong against her wicked ass grandmother and she takes to her aunt n uncle. New life, cousins and growing up in Macon,Ga. Life has some good and some bad but it seems like through it all a new sheriff win some old baby mama drama seems to stick by her. Nachelle is a triflin azz chick!!!! I want Danna on her head...can't wait to read part 2! Giving a shout out to a true protector Ken!

This book suffers from the same problems that afflict many African American urban books written by southern authors. The editing, (or the lack thereof) dominates the whole book. This author needs to understand that the narrative of any book, regardless of type, should be written in the King's English. Slang should be used only to quote a character. The story could have been interesting, but for the terrible grammar.

You definitely need a proof reader. Names we as mixed up and the slang was a little much. Also slot of jumping around.

Good story but there is lots of editing needed here. Otherwise, I was intrigued enough to get part 2. Hope the editing is better.

The story would be great if there weren’t so many typos. It also jumps around too much for you to follow what’s going on.