Claiming His Mountain Bride (Blackthorn Mountain Men Book 1) Kindle Edition

Thought I was getting a book about his mountain bride. That very short story didn't even take up 20 percent of the book. The other stories were short, and some even just teasers to the full books. The stories that were there are basically nothing but very graphic sex. While I don't mind sex, and I can deal with even graphic, I do prefer there to be a story worth reading to go along with it. Don't waste your time, unless you just want to read hot sex and not much else.

## Dang, too bad. This book could've been so good. I really liked the premise of the story. I love a possessive alpha hero who growls and spouts "you're mine". Unlike another reviewer, that didn't bother me at all. What did bother me, was that it felt like the middle of the book was missing. The set up was great. I was enjoying the crap out of the first couple of chapters. But then, BAM: They meet, immediately have sex, and they're in love when they wake up. Not one conversation? No spending time together? No talking, getting to know each other? So, so under developed. Be aware: this book ends at 18%. TOO SHORT. Bummer!

I don't really understand the high ratings on this one.This was really a short story, not a book. It ended at 18%. There are 3 other stories included though. I felt like there wasn't much of a story line. It was probably the most insta-love story I've ever read, and I'm not really a fan of that. It needed some editing (typos, occasional poor word choice, inconsistencies with how their bodies were arranged- example: She had her back to him, but he slid his hands around her to grab her butt.) If you're looking for quick, steamy erotica this is for you. Not my cup of tea.

Holy scorching hot heatwave… it may be January but “Claiming His Mountain Bride” is really heating things up! When an ex-marine and a wealthy city girl escape a blizzard inside an old hunting cabin, sparks fly as well as enough heat to melt snow! Throw one douche bag ex-fiancé into the mix and this “Semper fi” ex-marine goes “Oorah!” on all involved.So, if you like a über hot dude in uniform… or rather… out of uniform, give “Claiming His Mountain Bride” a try… you’ll be so glad you did!Disclaimer: No Kindles were seriously harmed while reading this novel. Children 18 and over only!Disclaimer for the Disclaimer… The term “seriously harmed” is not intended to include: overheating, scorch marks, minor melting or inconsequential fire that can be put out with an extinguisher. Fire retardant gloves highly recommended while reading. Reviewer is not responsible for run-on sentences, misplaced commas, to many of these thingy’s (…) and illegal use of overly descriptive language.RATING DETAILS (Based on 1 to 5 Gold Stars):STEAM FACTOR: 5 HEATWAVE STARSWRITING STYLE: 5 PROFESSIONAL STARSPLOT: 5 ORIGINAL STARSENGAGING CHARACTERS: 5 HOLY, HOT "OORAH" STARSSATISFYING CONCLUSION: 5 SATISFYING STARS*** I voluntarily received an ARC copy of this book in exchange for my honest review but great authors are difficult to find so I bought my very own copy! ***

But the bonus content is just awful. All of the stories including the title one are very VERY badly edited and proofread. The bonus stories are juvenile, implausible, and boringly repetitive. All the stories have way too much unimaginative sex and way too little plot. Plus some very annoying, far too frequent italicization. Don't bother with this one, it's a waste of time and money.

I voluntarily reviewed an ARC of this book. I love books by Madison Faye. You can count on her for hot, steamy, fun romance. This book is about a rich girl who can't stand the artificial trappings and refuses to accept an arranged marriage of 2 wealthy families. Hell no. Her fiance is cheating on her and tells her so. So she runs away to the mountain cabin her uncle have her. Her refuge. In a blizzard. She meets a gorgeous mountain man. He's living in her cabin. What an interesting development....is insta-love in the future?

This isn't the worst book I've read, but it was far from great. I really enjoy insta-love, ridiculous dirty talk, and over-the-top romance, but parts of this one were too much. If I had to read one more description of how huge, enormous, big, thick, fat, gorgeous, beautiful (all used multiple times in the story) his genitals were, I thought I would scream. Once or twice would have been fine, but repeatedly mentioning it (even italicizing it, again repeatedly) was just too much. I don't mind short, quick reads, but I wish this one had been a little better. This definitely had potential, but I wish I'd used my KU membership instead of money. I may give this author another try in the future, but I'll definitely borrow it before, or instead of, buying.

I voluntarily received and Advanced Reader Copy of this book, and my review is as follows. I waited to post my review until after my purchase of this book, Kindle version, was verified. Honestly, buying a book you received for free says a lot. I enjoy this authors writing style. Quick easy to read super naughty with (wishing they were real) he man Alpha hunks. This book is set differently from her previous stories, but but in no way compromises the quality of her work. Another fabulous story!