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A**O
a wonderful, spicy story
The author did a great job at creating believable characters with depth of personality and emotion. The way each of them seemed to 'fall' into the polyamory relationship felt very natural while still being extra 'spicy'. The story had great rhythm to it between the climactic scenes, not being too fast pace or being drawn out too long. The story seemed very plausible/realistic, as if the author had experience with, or did alot of research into, the high-level sports setting. If you are a fan of polyamory stories, enjoy good character/plot development, but have issues with fantasy/sci-fi, this would be a good book for you. I eagerly look forward to seeing more of these characters in further releases.
M**K
A Refreshing read
This one was different from his usual books. No magic or crazy government people. Just a great slice of life with all the trouble that comes with it. Loved the characters and the story, would have liked to have seen more of Evelyn. Can't wait till the next one.
D**U
not sure what to expect but glad i did
I was not sure what to expect out of this book. As it turns out it was both fun and very exciting. The main is just a good guy caught in thing beyond his control at the start and slowly shows his heart to those who need someone to give them push. not at all dull or over the top sports wise just a great story teller telling a great story
M**N
Great
This was a super fun read! I love the way Mr. Keys writes his characters, they all have so many dimensions. The setting felt exotic yet extremely relatable, and the island flavor of the whole story building towards a more international arc is wonderful. This is a very unique novel, and I'm glad the idea was expanded on by Mr. Keys. He just keeps getting better and better. I need a sequel.
D**K
Top shelf harem story with room to grow
I'm typically skeptical of male/multiple female relationships in stories, it usually feels forced like the MC is so amazing that women feel compelled to flock to him. But in this story it's more organic and a situation that seems somewhat plausible, despite taking place in a fiction country supposedly off the north coast of South America. Characters are interesting, especially Cadence. The sex is hot. Definitely worth picking up, look forward to the next installment.
K**R
Modern harem story for grownups
This is the rare book in the new harem genre, mostly existing in litrpg, without the juvenile fixation on big boobies and superhero antics. This is a book for grownups with character building, respectful relationships and a believable life challenges. It is well written, I enjoyed it immensely and can't wait for the followup. The reverse harem genre is expanding these years, but good books in the 'not porn' FFFM harem setting have been sorely missing. If you favor the harem relationship building part of litrpg but struggle with the 'monster girls' read this book and see how good it can be done.
K**K
Very Good
A nice change of pace from the usual storylines of the genre
J**)
Great story
I've been a fan of Shawn Keys since the first story. Great storyteller with creative plots. Unlike many harem-lit authors, the stories are not formulaic. Can't wait for volume 2!
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