Hell to Pay: Succubus, Book 2

Ian, our favorite Warlock, is back in Succubus, Book 2 (Hell To Pay). So is Aleria, our gorgeous and very hot succubus demon. Together with Stig, and a host of pirate demons Ian picked rescuing Aleria, they continue their quest to hunt down and slay Aleria’s past masters. Masters who played with Aleria’s lady bits and did naughty things to them and her. On the way, they overcome one past mistress, whom Ian is forced into some rather hot and steamy threesomes with her and Aleria. Despite his travails and a guilty conscience, the travels and threesomes continue as our band of demon pirates go north into the frozen wasteland of ice goblins and frost elves in search of a past master for Aleria to kill. The frost elves are nymphomaniacs, and their master is one bad ass mo’fo. With a teeny weeny.Markam does a great job with his characters and making us readers fall for Ian and Aleria. Read along with Ian as he struggles his way in and out of threesomes with Aleria and foursomes with frost elves, and he might get sacrificed to the Old Gods for his indiscretions. An easy 5 star read. Warning, once you start the book, don’t plan on anything else until you’re finished.

The second volume of AJ Markam's Succubus series continues the adventures of Quality Control Technician Ian, who is testing a new virtual reality experience for the fictional OtherWorld game as a Warlock class player, and his beautiful succubus Alaria. To be honest, the second volume wasn't my favorite, but it was still well worth the read.As Ian helps Alaria take revenge upon her former masters who had enslaved and abused her, he's beginning to have issues with Alaria's promiscuity. But he also learns a lot when he confronts Alaria's third master, the villainous Saykir, a Snow Elf who has established his own kingdom in the far north and allows only subservient females around himself, whom he abuses with no regard to their needs or feelings.The Snow Elf females in this kingdom adhere to the religion of the Goddess of Pleasure, Jaiya, whose teachings follow those of real-life sexologist Jaiya Ma. This is the most educational part of the novel, and I took great pleasure myself in the way the author integrated these teachings into his story.As with the first volume, Ian and Alaria are once again put in grave and life-threatening peril, and it's questionable whether they will survive.

I wasn't sure what i was getting myself into with this series. It's definitely NSFW so don't just leave the kindle open on your desk if you have nosy neighbors. I have enjoyed the story thus far and am looking forward to the future entries in the series. The character development is good, with enough descriptions to keep you in your imagination without putting in too many details to force your mind somewhere. There are enough MMO/DD references that if you haven't nerded out before odds are they may go over your head. All in all a fun and adult read good to escape for a few hours and let that imagination run.

What can I say, I'm a normal guy, and I truly enjoy this series. I can't put it down! It has everything I like, action, roll playing, jokes, laughs, suspense, a story that keeps u gripping ur seat, bad guys u love to hate! And LOTS of hot steaming sex!!! I never new I liked sex in my books until I read this series, but now I can't get enough!! Thank u so much for opening my eye to a new form of writing, I eagerly await ur future books!!! Keep it dirty out there!!!

This book has Bad Guys, But a really really Bad Guy this time and of course Good Guys, and everything in between. I have read A.J. Markham book , Succubus: A Christmas Special, but You don't have to read that book in order to understand His first book or the other ones that follow. As soon as I finish this review, I starting Book 2. Well I just finished Book 2, and believe Me it's just as good as His first book. So now it's on to Book 3.If You just want to sit back and enjoy a fantasy book I recommend reading one of A.J. Markam books. Well written & very enjoyable. You can almost picture Yourself there with all of the characters.Have fun & a safe trip.Bye

There was something disturbingly familiar about the letter before me.The handwriting was all pretty curves."You are in a computer game, Max."The truth was a burning green crack through my brain.Weapon statistics hanging in the air, glimpsed out of the corner of my eye.Endless repetition of the act of shooting, time slowing down to show off my moves.The paranoid feel of someone controlling my every step.I was in a computer game.Funny as hell, it was the most horrible thing I could think of.Someone needs to get the MC off whatever drugs he's on, so he can realize he's in a game.

Succubus 2 is a fantastic followup to the first boom in this series, filled with more of everything that made the first book great. We get to delve deeper into the burgeoning relationship between the MC Ian and his sexy succubus Alaria, and explore the intricacies of their contrasting natures in sexuality. While the focus of the first book was on moral quandaries of slavery within the video game trappings of OtherWorld, this time the main focus is on the dichotomy between polygamy and monogamy and how insecurity can create major issues. While the erotica is hit as ever, the book still does much to provoke thought. Probably one of if not the best entry in the series.

Another great work of ingenious thinking. I truly liked Succubus 2 (Hell To Pay). The book is full of action, adventure, creative thinking, comedy and of course sexual encounters, which by themselves don't go overboard, but give you enough to laugh at the situations and lets the imagination wander to new heights. I've purchased the 3rd book in the series and can't wait to get some free time to dig into.

Good but got bogged down in the second half. I enjoyed the first one more - better story and less eroticism

A well written flowing story. Plenty of adult scenes, particularly towards the end, but a very good action and RPG scenes as well. Great continuation and looking forward to the next book.

This is a temporary solution to the first volume. I await the third volume if any for this novel. The eroticism is much better than the previous volumes

This was a great follow up from the first in the series following Ian and his succumbs demon and his annoying imp, I great read and can't wait for the third in the series

Markam. You gotten me hooked on this series and I will be comming back for more if it released. I'll be waiting...