Chocolate Cream Pie Murder (A Hannah Swensen Mystery)
D**7
Too many recipes / too little plot
I've read all the books in this series and until the last few, I had been enjoying them. However, the stories just aren't as interesting as they used to be and the "who done it" isn't that hard to figure out.In Chocolate Cream Pie Murder, Hannah has decided to tell the town the truth about Ross at the end of a Sunday church service. That is far from the end of it though as Ross is still causing trouble and stress for her when he shows up in town a few days later.The exact reason behind the murder in this book wasn't fully obvious but I strongly suspected part of it and knew who would be killed and who did it LONG before the murder actually occurred. The first 3/4 of the book takes place over 8 days in February as Hannah is still trying to deal with the aftermath of her learning the truth about her "marriage" to Ross a few month earlier. Once the murder finally occurs, it is solved in a day or so over a couple of chapters. Then the (sadly) very predictable final chapter and we are left once again to wonder what will happen in yet another book. Yawn....A few thoughts on plot points:I do like the rapport between the main characters. I also like the occasional bits of humour thrown in by various characters. That being said, I do cringe when Delores gets on one of her criticizing streaks about how Hannah dresses or does her hair/makeup. Delores may think it is well intentioned but it comes across as Hannah not living up to Delores's expectations. Hannah is her own person and should dress/appear as she is comfortable.This book seemed to have more filler than usual - not just in recipes but in things that just took up space rather than advancing the plot. I'm not referring to Hannah and friends being stuck at the condo during the blizzard - that was an interesting dynamic. Instead, I felt that the following three segments could easily have been cut and replaced by real plot development.1) Delores asking Hannah to come up with an appetizer for her and Stephanie Bascomb, the ensuing discussion on sugared grapes, Hannah's trip to the Red Owl and the recipe.2) Readers all know that Moishe and Cuddles love to have their chase in Hannah's condo. Full out details of the (usual) three laps ONCE per book is more than sufficient. Any more than that is filler.3)The stress on Hannah is obvious but trying to express it in a dream sequence is lame and tired. Ms Fluke had done this in the past and it just feels like it was forced and inserted as an excuse to bring in yet another recipe.In the more recent books it seems that Ms Fluke has been trying to be more of a cookbook author than cozy mystery author. The actual story and plot seems to get thinner and the recipes more plentiful and detailed. Most of the recipes list the brand name for some of the ingredients which makes me wonder if she is being paid for naming the brand or receiving free/discounted merchandise in return. Most recipes include extremely detailed directions geared to a novice cook which is fine for some but rather boring for more experienced cooks. With the Kindle version of Chocolate Cream Pie Murder there was no recipe index at the beginning or end so if you didn't bookmark it, good luck finding any of the recipes you may actually have been interested in trying.Personally, I'd prefer to see ALL of the recipes at the END of the book rather than stuffed in at the end of almost every chapter. It would be far less disruptive to the flow of the story if you could just keep reading rather than having to flip/scroll through several pages of recipe info before finding the next chapter. Then again, if Ms Fluke were to put all the recipes at the end, it would be a bit too obvious how little of the book was actually dealing with the story. It's hard to tell from the Kindle edition, but my guess would be at least 25% of this book is the recipes - probably more.Yes, Hannah owns and operates "The Cookie Jar" but you don't have to share every recipe mentioned in every book. Pick a few - maybe 6-10 and put them at the end of the book. Then every few years release another Lake Eden Cookbook for those who want it all.
R**R
Do not waste your money or time
This was the worst book I have read in a long while. The writing is so elementary, way too many recipes and too repetitive. No mystery build up...felt like it was written by a twelve year old. Amazing how she painstakingly told us how to cook all the recipes and then repeated the recipe and directions at end of each chapter. I was so disappointed and I do not care that she left a truly teenage cliffhanger at the end...I will not read another of her books.
A**R
Very disappointing.
This is the last Hannah Swenson mystery I will ever read. I’ve read every one of these mysteries and I have no idea why they have become more like cookbooks than mysteries. Every conversation seems to be some description of some food that Hannah or Michele are coking, baking or thinking about cooking or baking. It is completely unrealistic that someone would get up in front of a church congregation to discuss something so personal and so nobody’s business! I also became so annoyed that Hannah has gone from gutsy, smart business woman to a milk toast fainting all over the place. It seems like this book was written by 3 different people. The ending was also ridiculous and seemed like it was thought of in 5 minutes because it’s time to wrap up the story. There were absolutely no surprises in this at all. I knew what Hannah’s stomach issue would be about the first time she felt sick. A real lack of imagination and I have no interest in pursuing how that turns out. I am really, really disappointed in this book and I feel duped by the author. No more Hannah Swenson for me.
A**B
Big Disappointment
I've read every Hannah Swensen book and this one was a big disappointment. Nothing happened for 3/4ths of the book and then they rushed a murder and solving it at the end. The plot was ridiculous and it truly seemed like a filler until the next novel comes out. I'm truly tired of the writer drawing things out so that there are more questions than answers at the end. Hannah's love life is pitiful and I'm over it. It's a shame because I read the books because I really enjoy the characters. I'll likely look for the next book at the library instead of pre-ordering like I've done with the last three books.
K**R
Too frustrating!
I have followed this series from the beginning but her writing is starting to get very frustrating. This book was more about food and recipes than getting to the plot. Even the debates Hannah had between herself got to the point that I skipped over them. I'm tired of her waffling between Norman and Mike and now that she's probably pregnant, that's going get even worse. I think I'll just stick to Nora Roberts and Mary Higgins Clark for my romantic mystery fix. At least they haven't gotten into the soap opera thing. Hopefully they never will.
C**Y
Disappointed
Too many recipes and not enough substance with this story. Will not purchase future books but check out from library.
T**N
Ghost writer?
I've read the whole series and have enjoyed getting to know the characters but have felt cheated the last couple of books. I have even wondered if the books had begun to be written by a ghost writer. The books have been long on filler and short on mystery. I feel like the author is a better writer than what she has been producing lately.
E**O
Not like they used to be
The last couple books have been more like short stories than a full book. Story line is rushed and predictable— no suspense left at all. Author more concerned with including a cliff hanger for the next book than developing the story. As short as these books have become, there should be a new one every couple months instead of maybe once a year.
B**N
Too many recipes.
I have all the Joanne Fluke novels and was looking forward to this. I was disappointed in that I felt there were more recipes than storyline, remember this is supposed to be a crime novel and not a cookery book. If the recipes were placed at the end of the book rather than after each chapter it would have been classed as a novella. The story itself was good in that it rounded off some of the cliffhangers from previous books, but I thought it seemed rushed with less substance than her previous novels. Hope the next one is better.
H**9
Normal service.....
has been resumed! or nearly as there's a sting in the tail which I really hope comes to nothing! Silly really, it is just the lightest of light cosy crime after all but I do actually care about the characters:))Am still puzzled by the recipes though; at one point Hannah explains to her sister that if they decide the recipe needs a hotter temperature they can turn the thermostat up, as opposed to doing what?! And then there's the 'recipe' for cookie sandwiches: are there people out there who need telling EXACTLY how to spread Nutella on one cookie and then place another one on top? And why do almost all the recipes consist of combinations of tins and packages? I know this is Minnesota in winter, but surely there must be SOME fresh food around?No matter, the books are still great fun.
M**N
Well Up To Standard
I really enjoyed this book. I was really engrossed and felt it was one of the best in the series (I've read them all, in sequence) I 'm eagerly awaiting the next one to see how Joanne Fluke resolves Hannah's problems!
J**E
Chocolate Cream Pie Murder
This was a thoroughly enjoyable book, up to this Authors brilliant standard.
K**H
Good story
Very pleased good book, enjoyed.
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