This is Not Your Story Paperback – 14 Feb. 2017

Nice positive uplifting story , but far too unrealistic in the telling. Male characters lack authenticity and the voice in which they are told comes through as female. Young men are naturally testosterone driven, angry and if they are confused, they don't express it in such flowery language. Also the writer needs to separate what she is trying to say from what the characters would say in real life, using real dialogue.